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ShadowFire Review
Name: ShadowFire
Website: http://shadowfire.twirp.net Owner: ShadowFire Review started on: September 3,2009 Review finished on: September 7,2009 First Impression
What is perhaps intentional to you was thought as a coding error to me. The immense misalignment of header and content doesn't work for me. I have a 1280x1024 and 1920x1200 resolution size computers, and to see a header hugging the left wall with a content space the size of a square watermelon, it's really starting to erk me.
I know most site layouts are 800x600 compatible, but who in the world uses that resolution these days? So unless there are ancient people who uses that resolution and sees your site, it wouldn't be a problem. But other than that, I see a large amount of content. That tells me you have a lot to offer throughout your website. You have the quantity, but do you have the quality? The Layout
Besides everything I said before, I'm going to quote you for reference:
"This format is a big change from my previous layouts, it's like my other two site's. I did this so it wouldn't be too big for 800X600 resolutions, and not too small for 1280X1024 and bigger resolutions. And this way.... I'm allowed to rant! Ohohohohoho."You want to make the layout fullscreen, since you're not using a fixed width for your content. However, you're jeopardizing the outcome of your header. Your welcome box, the way you put it there, makes it look like a stop. Like there's nothing else going to happen on the right side. A box rather than a subtle fade sort of thing. I want to draw some quick attention to The Forgotten Lair's past layouts. Version 12 especially. It's very clean and easy to move around, whereas your links and affiliates are displayed everywhere leaving not a space. The top right blank space doesn't work well with the left side at all. Think about distribution, and how to make a layout flow more freely than cluttered. I've noticed throughout your layout/past layouts that your site name is always seemed to be dwarfed by the version's title. If anything, I would think the name of your site was Washed Out opposed to ShadowFire. They both have a similiar style of font and the about the same size. There is no dominance in either titles that draws the viewer to knowing what the site's name is. Naturally, the site name should be more of the focal point than the version's title. Website name is much more important than a version name. Link Exchanges
Links
The Pages
Site Layouts
You've mentioned you had to edit every page everytime you made a new layout. Since all your pages are already in .php form, it confused me whether or not you use PHP Includes. :P So I'm curious. Link Me
Tutorials
The Designs
Layouts
You have a lot of them. :| My goodness. You should think of recycling a lot of the old ones, however. The Old Layouts though, you really don't need. Save yourself some space and delete them. The good news, is that the newer ones are really nice. :D Graphics
Buttons: Same template deal. Signs: I like how you provided the five signs on each page for each type. I'm also having a problem everytime I open up a page though. My anti virus acts up saying there's a trojan everytime I open one. :| PNGs: They're really good. Good quality, good sizes. Keep at it. :D Wallpapers: Could use a bit more work. I like #16 because it's simplistic. But the other ones are excuses to fill up every corner of the canvas. Quality of the scans aren't that great, and you seem to just mush textures in and blend it. When you're given a 1280x1024 canvas people usually tries to cover all of it with crazy amount of textures and scans. People usually assumes that the way they do avatars is the same with wallpapers. No. it never works. There is no dominant focal point and the scans in the background tries to fight with the main scan for attention.
Blogs: Are so old school. Consider dumping the page, as no one uses them anymore and half of them aren't as attractive. Consider recycling your designs/graphics. You are able to produce quality works at a large amount in quantity. Don't let unusable layouts and graphics take over 50% of your overall count. Final Impression
There is obviously potential in ShadowFire, and you can do both quality and quanity. But you're missing the idea of composition and simplicity in your designs. Try doing more large canvas works (wallpapers, paintings even) where you have to force yourself to do make the overall look good on a large canvas. When you have to turn to simplicity, you can try to do layouts without the use of image stretch to cover up content space.
Perhaps then you could finally understand how to display things (scans, focal points) that will unlock its full potential. Would I want to come back again to visit? Of course I will. :) |